You have a talant for this kind of writing, it`s like to read a novel, great job, I can`t wait your next part.
Looks like you have finded generous in giving ammo and gun mentor, but is this good idea to keep him if he don`t help in information about other things? Almoust every article for newbies in forum, there are advices to get mentor who tell you about everything, so even new guy understad that he must find better mentor... But those only my thougts...
Good luck with your new newbie life and post next part soon
