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Originally Posted by Mercury
Nice read and great writing...I especially like the part about Star winning the league. 
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Thanks Star, and lol you don't say
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Originally Posted by dj.
Short attention span and all that
Had me excited for a little while, if it helps, hehe 
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Well, picking you up on the baseball analogy, I can't take offence until I progress beyond the prologue of Delillo's Underworld I guess
But hell, if you're only going to ever read 50 pages of prose in your life, that prologue is what you should read!
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Originally Posted by MistyDawn
Skimmed the rest and paused briefly to look at pretty picture of Nadie and some big monster at the end.
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Yeah, and you know what, it took longer to select the pictures and fiddle with them than it did to write the words so I guess I got my priorities right
