ok, as promised some more feed back for sections 2&3:
2: Good section, very useful for guiding the reader. My only comment is that the buy/don't buy lists seem a little out of place there, perhaps they should be at the start of each of the professional sections.
(Also I personally think you do the Mann MPH a bit of a disservice, I think it is a very good and fun gun that is much better than a m2100 for an exprienced player, but it is indeed no good for the newbie.)
3: Again a very important section to have near the beginning.
You talk about using '3' to autorun in the text but don't mention 'r' and then go on to talk about moving autorun to '1', which is a non-trivial operation with the new UI. Perhaps it would be better to leave all mention of changing the keys untill your next section where the UI is discussed in more detail.
It would be useful, I think, to include in your 'hot-key list' the default action keys for a new player (3 = autorun etc). Although I don't know what those default actions are now.
The only other missing control that is important for a newbie is 'follow mode' by right clicking another player.
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