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Old 06-14-2007, 17:10   #24
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Ok, breaking it down we got the build-up of annoying chattering women, then the shock solution of just pissing on them.... now that was unexpected, broke a taboo or two, and worked as a quick gag. When the guy spoke afterwards and got a meek reply from the ladies it turned into something a bit more demeaning, a bit less of a silly shock joke. If there was more annoying factors than just talking, it would have worked better. Just my opinion. It woulda been funnier to end on pissing. It's a progression of sorts of the clip where a girl is singing (badly) into a webcam in an office and a guy twats her round the head with a huge book. Not acceptable behaviour, but ok for a funny moment after the fact


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