The Mentor and disciple.. A love story..

[Thaddeuss]

hello again fellow entropians,

I just finished my most recent video called The Mentor and Disciple,

I was inspired by a SL video i saw posted in here so i made my own version of it for EU
The Star of my video is my good freind Mini Ministen, she was never my deciple officially but i did take her on unofficially as my trade disciple.
We are not in love as the video implies but have become very good freinds since meeting ingame in 2006.

Tell me what you guys think its my first attempt at a fictional storyline.

"The Mentor and Disciple" via YouTube

[Silver Ice]

Awww! *sniff*


Pretty good video, it was cute.

[dj.]

Blood-Hell!!

*sniff*

Very well done

[dj.]

p.s Its 'are you there?'

Not 'are you their'

Just trying to help lol

[DanielleYourMom]

Not bad - not bad !!
I love to see these types of movies - not just something that was fun to you and stories of the people you know, but a universal story for all to enjoy - so good job !

I've seen a ton of movies where someone who thinks it's all really funny .. but it's always "I guess you had to be there" moments.
This, however, is a cute story for all to enjoy

I would check the spelling cuz I did spot a few different spelling/grammar errors.

Nice job Thad =)

[Thaddeuss]

MY spelling is bad and i do check it a couple time s but i always seem to miss something hehe.

TY very much for all the kind replys

[Johned]

Nice story, keep it up

[MindStar9]

My Dear Thaddeus ... first, thank you for your PM to give me a heads up about this new video, I've been waiting for it to be posted. Second, when I view someone's video, I keep an open mind and accept it for what it is, and also how it makes me feel, or what I gain from it.

This is what I have to say ... you did a wonderful job of capturing the essence of the music ... the storyline held my attention all the way through, and to say that some moments were very touching is an understatement. Many of us produce videos, but we aren't professionals out the gate ... we learn from each video we often struggle through, and sometimes perhaps we don't catch everything, but the key in getting better at it is to continue making videos, and I very much want to encourage you to do so.

I loved your video ... not for what it wasn't, but simply for what it was, which is how (IMO) we should look at everyone's videos. Anytime you'd like help with anything, please PM me and I'd be more than happy to be of assistance if I can.

Now go make another one Sweetie!

[Warpath]

Man i loved it, well done.


P.S.

I noticed you included the artist and the song name :P

[Wildman Alpha]

Simply Beautiful and timeless!!!

*Sniff,,,, Sniff* You made the Wildman drop some tears!