The Story, as promised

Alice · 10-15-2006, 00:23

After i have been asked, if there is a story behind the pic i posted in another thread, it seems i have to tell it. Well, Im not really good in story telling, but here it is:

Well, how did it come to this pic?

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For that I need to go back to the beginning, although, I don’t want to ask what has been there first, the egg, or the Atrox, the egg was finally there.
(how it came this is quite clear: Love)
To make a long story short, here the summary

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Unfortunately, not just the EBN was informed about the egg, it also made a really bad guy interested, a real psycho: the well known and one of the most wanted Mercenaries ever “Bandito Ramirez”.

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Bandito Ramirez waited at the crater for the right moment, what he didn’t know, he was recognized.

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As soon the Atrox Queen was gone, he ran to the egg, and stole it.
The father chirpy couldn’t do much, better said, he did what his instinct told him (no, not to defend your childs, to GET THE HELL OUTTA THERE, and ran away)

The person who saw him as no one else than Nus Magsun, who was interested to learn more about the Atrox childhood. As soon he saw Bandito Ramirez stealing the egg, he phoned with his multi functional GPS mobile his headquarters. Those sent immediately 2 special agents, who followed the thief to the Genesis Amethera Headquarters

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Bandito Ramirez didn’t see another choice, went to a random floor, in a random apt, and placed the egg there, and sneaked out.

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The special agents asked for heavy support. The special unit arrived soon, searching in the whole building for the egg, starting at floor 1.
When they arrived at floor 11, they heard loud music in one apt, rushed in.
They found me, looking as innocent as I could, lying on the bed.

Alice · 10-15-2006, 00:34

But am i really that innocent? What did I do the apartment of a stranger?
To answer this I need to go back in the past again, and have to explain some things.

Once, while I was exploring Hadesheim again, I got lost again. I tried to find a way out, when suddenly someone in a dark corner started talking to me.

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I turned around, and except a tumbleweed and a little spider in the net I couldn’t see much.

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He brought me to his boss, called “Don Angelo”.

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Well, the offer was to found a underground party organisation. With his buddy in my back, already holding his pistol, I accepted.
The party organisation was kept as secret as possible, and just selected people were invited.
We used several apartments, always moving from one to another, but we found our favourite apartment soon, the apartment of Mindstar9.
We had several famous guest there:

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But, as you can see, it seems the music attracted several unwanted people.

After finding the “leak” and “dealing” with it, we decided to hire a security guy, called Bruce.
He really was worth his cash

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At this special day, we entered our favourite party apartment again, and started. We didn’t pay much attention about the green vibrating thing.

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Alice · 10-15-2006, 00:42

Suddenly, Bruce called us to be aware, and we tried to hide.
I was chosen to distract the “visitors” and to get them away, while the rest was trying to hide in the next room.

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But that wasn’t that easy. I saw pretty soon that they haven’t been here for destroying the party, more to find that strange green thing.
Well, it wasn’t hard to miss, so they found it soon. They stared at it, happy to have found it without complication or even a fight.
Then it happened. Bruce who was hiding at the balcony, sneaked behind them, and knocked them out (he was worth his cash)

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I didn’t wasted time, and send all to the 20th floor, where they should hide.
Just in time, 30 second later, the apartment was rushed by the main force.
Bruce escaped with a heroic jump with his parachute from the balcony from the balcony, the whole special unit teleported to the ground floor and tried to follow him.

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Later I brought all the party people out of the house, and they teleported away, and spread above whole Calypso, until the situation calms down again. All were saved.
Bandito Ramirez wasn’t seen since them, at least, no confirmed sightings. Although, according to rumours, he was seen near Nus Magsun’s apartment, and that he kidnapped the scientist.

And Bruce? Well...

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Ramirez won’t give up so easy probably

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the end

Actors

Psycho as Bandito Ramirez
Coop as special agent Mully
Josh as special agent Scoulder, (one of the room rushers too)
Ricardo, as the leader of the room rushers
Sqiddy asDon Angelo’s helper
Toshba asDon Angelo
Eric and Baf as the noobs begging for entry
Me as Alice

Guest stars
Atrox young as Atrox queen
Chirpy young as the father chirpy
Feffoid Warrior as Bruce
The Atrox egg as itself
Araneatrox Prowler as little spider

The party guests:
shadowcatcher, grethyr, forrest, kobs, toshba, ricardo, psycho, zak, eric, josh

story finished, i think at least, feel free to post

edit, forgot the actors

edit2, since i was asked to write a bit more
story nr 2, the past of Bruce can be found here
http://www.entropiaforum.com/forums/...399#post743399

MindStar9 · 10-15-2006, 01:01

What a fun storyline that was ... really enjoyed it Alice, but then I'm a sucker for picture storytelling.

Waheed · 10-15-2006, 03:41

Nice story

GoLDs · 10-15-2006, 09:10

Great story Alice! Btw... how can i contact bruce?

Falco · 10-15-2006, 11:44

Well done.

We are waiting for further stories...

Quote:

Originally Posted by Alice

Once, while I was exploring Hadesheim again, I got lost again.

You need a guide, or a good city map.

Blob · 10-15-2006, 13:32

Great stuff. My favourite bit: "we decided to hire a security guy, called Bruce.
He really was worth his cash" and then seeing a huge feffoid with a shirt saying 'security' on it

I laughed at that bit most