Story2, The past of Bruce

[Alice]

I hope i won't forget anything

Before starting with the story, I wanted to say thanks to all of the ppl who participated in the screenies. They didn’t know the story. Especially I want to thank the MA guides, who gave their permission to take screenies of them.
In any case, the people had no real idea what the story was about, nor what they would speak in the story (before someone is annoying the ppl, or especially the guides! that stuff was my idea!).
I hope you enjoy it.

Bruce is a Feffiod Warrior and one of the actors in this story.
The Story, as promised

But what brought a peaceful Feffoid to work as security guy for the CDM (Calypso Dance Mafia)?

Well, let’s go back in time, when Hadesheim just was built and hired, since not many humans were available, some Feffiods to help in their Power Plant.

Bruce father Norman, a terribly bad trader, accepted the job offer gratefully.

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Some day during his break, he saw a beauty (well, for him at was at least): the Maffoid girl Mary, who was searching for fruits.

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Mary fell in love with Norman immediately.
And as the things tend to go, Bruce was born soon after

(here should have been a "dirty" pic, but I decided not to post it)


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Feffiods grow up very fast and teenager Bruce was searching (or rather stalking girls) to find a girlfriend.

But he put his goal a bit too high, since his eyes fell on the 4 town beauties and they were out of his range.


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But as soon he got a car, this lack of interest changed.
Although, the girl was a bit weird, she insisted to go around naked (not that Bruce ever complained about this) and always carried a flashlight with her.
It is also questionable how Bruce fit into the car?!


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The luck didn’t last long, and it came as it had to; a guy with a better car showed up and the girl left him


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[Alice]

Bruce was disappointed, and joined a gang, the Mohjos, led by a person just known as
“The Mohster” (this cowboy pimp in the picture).


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The Mohjos were the most violent and aggressive gang Hadesheim has ever seen, robbing bars and shops mainly


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And soon Bruce became the guy in charge of “convincing” people to pay the “safety fee”. Especially the clothing shops were the target of Bruce.


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After months of being terrorized the clothes sellers left calypso, a real sale was impossible.
Ander after losing most of their shipments, the bar suppliers stopped all deliveries, just telling the poor bar owners there will be a next shipment soon.
Since the Mohjos are gone, there is hope that the shipments will indeed arrive in the future, but first the suppliers have to see it is calmer nowadays.

But with more and more blackmailing and robbing, the Mohjos gang came more and more in the view of the police.
But, the Mohjos were experienced in hiding.


Therefore police hired an observing and infiltrating specialist, “Eagle Eye” Johnson.
Johnson observed Hadesheim day and night, using his secret weapon, the trained Hiryou
Pupu.
(actually, Pupu was more intelligent than his partner, who was mainly specialized in shooting and deserved the “eagle eye” title more, but as long he got some nutrios, Pupu didn’t care)


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After some days of flying high above the roofs of Hadesheim, Pupu finally managed to find the gangs headquarters.


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Johnson informed the police immediately, and they sent their special squad.


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[Alice]

All of the Mohjos were arrested (with some casualties), except Bruce. (According to rumours, the Mohster managed to escape too)

Exactly at that day Bruce visited a friend in Hospital


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But, why am I there too?
Well, Bruce’ friend had a little accident. While going out with my little pet Daikiba, called Hope, she suddenly ran away.


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I was terribly sorry, and visited the poor girl in hospital, and met Bruce there also.

But, let’s go back to Bruce.
After visiting his friend that day, Bruce went back, and found his gang arrested.
He was lost again and made a mistake. Bruce robbed a Feffoid trader.


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The clans sent him into exile.

Without his gang, friends, and even the support of the Feffiod Clans, Bruce was desperate, but remembered me.
After a little conversation, I hired him as security guy.

Thinking back now, he stole the Atrox egg most likely to be accepted by the clans again.
Wonder of our paths will cross again.


THE END

Actors
The Mohster : moh
Agent Johnson : Hank
Bruce’ friend : Arti
Alice as herself

Groups
(Appearance in the screenies, from left to right)

The beach beauties: Yumi, Reyes, Mikah, Edana
The Mohjos : Josh, Outman, moh, Edana, Eric, Falco
The Police : The guides Emma, Simon, David, Paul, Zoe


Guest stars
Several Feffiods as Bruce, Norman and the Feffoid Trader
Maffoid Guard as Teresa
Umbra Female Adept as Bruce’ GFs
Molisk Leader as “the guy with the better car”
Hiryou Young as Pupu

[Alice]

oki, as i thought, i didn't need the space ^^

well then, hope you enjoyed the story

hf

maybe i should need ot for something else

I'm sorry for some pictures, first, i can't draw, and second, the last pictures were too big (i took them with a higher resolution, and had to make them a bit smaller)
so, sry for this

[mohsinali410]

what a story, much better then i ever expected! +rep! alice has done it again

[Edana]

great story master
love it

^^

[Falco]

I am inspired. A beautiful story.



And the people all over the world applause:


Ich bin begeistert. Eine sehr schöne Geschichte.

Je suis inspiré. Une histoire très belle.

Ik word geïnspireerd. Een zeer mooi verhaal.

Εμπνέομαι. Μια πολύ όμορφη ιστορία.

Eu sou inspirado. Uma história muito bonita.

Me inspiran. Una historia muy hermosa.

私は促される。非常に美しい物語。

Я воодушевлян. Очень красивейший рассказ.

나는 고무시킨다. 아주 아름다운 이야기.

Sono ispirato. Una storia molto bella.

Thanks Alice



(+rep will follow if i am able to give again...)

[Oracle]

HAHAHAHA! Alice..I really enjoyed that and can't wait to read more 'Bruce'

Funnily enough this is exactly how I imagined Bruce's origins when he was introduced in your last story

Obtuse humour rocks!

[Toshba]

Well done Alice. Always enjoyable reading one of your stories.

Nice to see all the RP ppl involved too.

Keep up the good work, and say Hi to Bruce next time you see him.

+Rep

[Mikah]

Absolutly Lovely
Finally definetly paid off, selling sweat for 4.4

The Guides all toguether pic looks really nice, congrats Alice, now ofc, waiting for the third part .. what happened to Bruce's kid??