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Old 07-07-2007, 19:53   #1
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Ill in Sakura City

One morning I woke up after a bad dream.

I went on the balcony of my appartement in Sakura City and made exercises in fresh air.

Stooped left.

Stooped right.

I felt awesome.

I took my pet for a walk.

And I had the idea to sit with my darling at the banks of the lake, watching the rippersnappers eating neighbours.


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Old 07-07-2007, 20:02   #2
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Suddenly I got headache.

Also my back started to hurt.

So I did run as fast as my agility allowed

to the doctor.

He examined me carefully

And after a long period of meditation

He said, I had an infection with bacteriums

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Old 07-07-2007, 20:04   #3
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He gave me a jab

and pills.

But it didn’t help. I even got stomach pains.
An so I searched for a restroom.

But there was none in Sakura. I had to cower behind

the next bush


Dear government, if you have spared a little amount of money, please, build a restroom.

Yours sincerely

N. Falco G., Sakura inhabitant

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Old 07-07-2007, 21:15   #4
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nice thread
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Old 07-08-2007, 13:41   #5
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Great display of creativity!
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Old 07-08-2007, 15:31   #6
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Nice use of icons. But I aways think of something else for the one you've used for cowering.
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Old 07-10-2007, 21:52   #7
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LOL

Excellent story, but I think the Sakura City council blew this years budget on the Parks Department to get the new trees and fill the dangerous hole under the TP platform.

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Old 07-14-2007, 21:53   #8
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Good job.. very imaginative
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Old 07-15-2007, 16:56   #9
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I like your story thanks !
And i like Sakura city


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Old 07-29-2007, 20:07   #10
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Nice story
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