My Ongoing Fan Fiction

[Ayhoe]

I've been writing a fanfic story in my diary thread for quite some time. I realize some people who enjoy fan fiction might not pay attention to the diaries forum, so I'll link it here as well.

Ayhoe's Diary
(Currently weighing in at 7,380 words.)

I will also designate this thread to be the location for discussion or suggestions to improve my story.

[Ayhoe]

The work-in-progress title of my fan fiction is going to be Children of Silver. Also, I realize that I wrote two recent posts in present tense and then switched back to past tense. I will fix that.

[Ayhoe]

Alrighty, the two present-tense entries have been fixed and Chapter 2 has begun.

I would like to add, for those who may be curious, that all of the characters so far are based on real, existing Entropia Universe avatars. Rain Man was my old avatar, now locked and cashed-out. The others all have real-person origins as well, but I will refrain from mentioning them so as to not spoil the plot for anyone who has not read it.

I am becoming more and more fond of this as I progress. Keep checking the diary for more updates! Hope people are enjoying the story so far.

(Also, someone please post! I feel like a nerd filling this thread with my own replies.)

[Ayhoe]

** Post removed for privacy, please disregard. **

[Ayhoe]

Here's what it looks like when I sit down to write:



I use the fantastic Q10 for writing, it's a wonderful fullscreen text editor.

[Wistrel]

oooh yay! new FF!!!

Will take a look (and at that editor too!)

Wistrel

[Ayhoe]

Originally Posted by Wistrel

oooh yay! new FF!!!

Will take a look (and at that editor too!)

Wistrel

Hi Wistrel! Long time no talk! (This is Rain Man in a new body. )

[MaDsTeR]

this sux bigtime

[Apple]

Since Ayhoe was abducted by the robots, the story has continued in my diary. I urge you, citizens of Caylpso, to read what is contained in both diaries. It could spell the end of life as we know it on this planet.