2nd Weekly EF Haiku Contest "HaikEU" - Page 2

Dextar · 04-28-2008, 12:36

Quote:

Originally Posted by panter

Having fun under sun,
crafting, mining , hunting,
it's entropia universe.

Not bad Panter however for the contest the format is:

17 syllables exactly in 3 lines:

1st line 5 syllables
2nd line 7 syllables
3rd line 5 syllables

If you are not sure on syllable count enter each line seprately on this Syllable Counter webpage and check the results.

You can enter again but don't EDIT your post, make a new post instead and remember THIS WEEK's THEME: "First Teleporter Run" (You don't have to use these exact words just convey the image of what First Teleporter Run means to you!)

Okey Dokey!

Good Luck!

Dex

panter · 04-28-2008, 12:46

Running to the Twin tp,
Meeting many peoples,and
nasty atroxe's!

This is now made with rules. but my english is quit bad. i hope its good enough

Dextar · 04-28-2008, 13:04

Quote:

Originally Posted by panter

Running to the Twin tp,
Meeting many peoples,and
nasty atroxe's!

This is now made with rules. but my english is quit bad. i hope its good enough

You are just one syllable off in first line. (TP would be considered two. The Syllable counter gets confused sometimes when we use acronyms

Post the same one again in a NEW Post and just remove a word in the first line and you are good to go!)

Dex

panter · 04-28-2008, 13:07

Running to the Twin,
Meeting many peoples,and
nasty atroxe's!

Dextar · 04-28-2008, 13:13

Quote:

Originally Posted by panter

Running to the Twin,
Meeting many peoples,and
nasty atroxe's!

WOOT!

We have our 3rd Qualified Entry!

Well done!

The monkeys shall now dance!

(Good Luck panter!)

Dextar · 04-28-2008, 21:52

Who will be the next entrant?

The Monkeys are waiting!

Dex

micker · 04-29-2008, 00:58

i've been all over
even to minopolis
hold on, Ama-WHAT?!?

Hurrikane · 04-29-2008, 02:32

Map says desert east
Red dots, split the gap, they see
Chasing, turret, Town

Hurrikane

Tidesong · 04-29-2008, 05:58

Left spaceship behind
Running into open grass
A new world awaits

Ninacka · 04-29-2008, 07:41

let's maybe this will work (i suck at poetry btw....):

dodging the mighty bots
killed by the nasty spiders
stuck in the outpost

ahh, reminds me of the outpost west of troy

View Poll Results: Will Week 2's HaikEU Contest get 20 Entries?
Yes, People like it to make the Monkeys Dance!	21	46.67%
No, But People still like to see the Monkeys Dance!	5	11.11%
Maybe, But but I like to see the Monkeys Dance!	5	11.11%
I don't care I just want to see the Monkeys Dance!	14	31.11%
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