2nd Weekly EF Haiku Contest "HaikEU"

[Dextar]

Originally Posted by micker

i've been all over
even to minopolis
hold on, Ama-WHAT?!?

WOOT!



We have our 4th Qualified Entry!

Well done!

The monkeys shall now dance!



(Good Luck micker!)

[Dextar]

Originally Posted by Hurrikane

Map says desert east
Red dots, split the gap, they see
Chasing, turret, Town

WOOT!

We have our 5th Qualified Entry!

Well done!

The monkeys shall now dance!

(Good Luck Hurrikane!)

[Dextar]

Originally Posted by Tidesong

Left spaceship behind
Running into open grass
A new world awaits

WOOT!

We have our 6th Qualified Entry!

Well done!

The monkeys shall now dance!

(Good Luck Tidesong!)

[Dextar]

Originally Posted by Ninacka

let's maybe this will work (i suck at poetry btw....):

dodging the mighty bots
killed by the nasty spiders
stuck in the outpost

ahh, reminds me of the outpost west of troy

Excellent imagery Ninacka however your syllable count is off.

the format is 17 syllables exactly in three lines:

1st line 5 syllables
2nd line 7 syllables
3rd line 5 syllables

don't sweat budging it up most do on the first attempts.

All ya need to do is repost your entry in this thread with the proper number of syllables and you are good to go. Don't edit your original post make a new one. You can use the same piece (amended to fit the format of course) but it must be in a new post because of the submission rules.

Good luck and looking forward to see your entry.

Dex

[Ninacka]

now it should be better

dodged the mighty bots
killed by the nasty spiders
stuck in the outpost

[Dextar]

Originally Posted by Ninacka

dodged the mighty bots
killed by the nasty spiders
stuck in the outpost

WOOT!

We have our 7th Qualified Entry!

Well done!

The monkeys shall now dance!

(Good Luck Ninacka!)

[cheeky monkey]

I keep looking for
Teleports, but keep finding
the Rev terminals

[Alien]

My entry:

Gather up the noobs
Run, run, run, run, run, run, run
Run, run, run, run, dead!

[Dextar]

Originally Posted by cheeky monkey

I keep looking for
Teleports, but keep finding
the Rev terminals

WOOT!

We have our 8th Qualified Entry!

Well done!

The monkeys shall now dance!

(Good Luck cheeky monkey!)

[Dextar]

Originally Posted by Alien

Gather up the noobs
Run, run, run, run, run, run, run
Run, run, run, run, dead!

WOOT!

We have our 9th Qualified Entry!

Well done!

The monkeys shall now dance!

(Good Luck Alien!)